Dragonfly: Any of various large insects of the order Odonata or suborder Anisoptera, having a long slender body and two pairs of narrow, net-veined wings that are usually held outstretched while the insect is at rest. Also called regionally darner, darning needle, mosquito fly, mosquito hawk, needle, skeeter hawk.
Poetry: The art or work of a poet.
Prolixity: Excessive wordiness in speech or writing; longwindedness
Monday, October 5, 2009
Artificial Light by Marion and Entrance by Rainer Maria Rilke
Entrance
Whoever you are: in the evening step out
of your room, where you know everything;
yours is the last house before the far-off:
whoever you are.
With your eyes, which in their weariness
barely free themselves from the worn-out threshold,
you lift very slowly one black tree
and place it against the sky: slender, alone.
And you have made the world. And it is huge
and like a word which grows ripe in silence.
And as your will seizes on its meaning,
tenderly your eyes let go. . . .
~ Rainer Maria Rilke ~
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"Every exit is an entrance somewhere else." ~Tom Stoppard
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Artificial Light
By Marion
The dawn creeps into my window,
a willing thief of the night;
I wrap my arms around myself
and tremble at the onslaught of light.
Is ink to paper the real thing
or merely an illusion?
Is the cursor on the computer screen
reality or a wild delusion?
Cloudy, dark, rainy day
driving home one afternoon
bright lights in my rearview mirror
shone like the sun at noon.
Which is reality,
the headlights or the sun?
Does it really matter in the end
when a life has finally begun?
Moonlight, sunlight,
flowers in the rain,
their heads bowed as if in prayer
drooped, as if in pain. . .
Beseeching the gods of morning
to help them raise their heads. . .
They only live one single day
by afternoon, they’re dead.
The question is how to live
your one solitary life.
By the sunlight or the shadows
or by artificial light.
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27 comments:
"Which is reality, the headlights or the sun?" - beautiful.
And thank you for quoting my favorite messed up poet, Rilke, who writes so beautifully on love and loss and loneliness and whose book "Letters to a Young Poet" still feeds my soul after all these years.
And of course, Tom Stoppard is freakin' awesome. I believe you're quoting Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead but I can't quite prove it...
Love your writing, keep sharing more with us, please!!
Phoenix, "Letters to a Young Poet" is one of my all-time favorite books, too. Thank you for your sweet comment. Blessings!!!
Wonderful poem, Marion. I also really like the quote by Tom Stoppard. Thanks for sharing
xoxoxo
These are both wonderful poems, but I really like yours best.
Did you take that beautiful photo?? I love it!
"Which is reality,
the headlights or the sun?" Well done!
Loved Artificial Light! Beautiful Marion. And, just in case you were not yet sure...I am real, my embrace of you is real. You are concrete and weighty in my life. Wrapping my arms around you my Marion.
The Rilke poem - so like Whyte when he says to take a step out the door and into the wood. Reconnect. I love the thought, stepping out of your room "where you know everything." (and I stopped telling myself all the things I've been telling myself)...
Char, you are so sweet. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings!
Kelly, yes, I took that picture last year on a foggy morning. It's my neighbor's tree, though. LOL! You're too kind, dear friend. Blessings!
AJ, I appreciate you! Blessings!
Annie, my sister-girlfriend, thanks for the hug and your kind words. Yes, the Rilke poem is a lot like Whyte. Lately, I've been fighting the urge to dig in and hide under my books and never leave the house. It took me 30 years, but I finally taught my husband to shop on a budget and he now does Wally World and actually keeps to the list. What a load lifted (literally!) and a gift. My cats found one of my old bags of yarn and I've taught myself some wild new crochet moves and I'm making scarves with my new stitches. Only problem is fighting off the cats who think crocheting is a kitty game. We call our 4 cats criminals and threaten them often with velvet kitty handcuffs---all to no avail---they still run the place and hold us at paw point!! LMAO! Love you! Blessings!
Marion - Oh, oh! While I love the Rilke, I love yours as much! You tackle a profound question, one that I think we here in poetryland struggle with. How to live our lives? Your ending really makes me think about the choices we have and the decisions we must make. Reality? Fiction? Life? Cyberlife? I've begun referring to you and others I've met here as my friends - as real to me as anything corporeal before me. I believe in you. That's my choice.
Dearest Marion your poem is the one I love the best. You are so dear.
Love Renee xoxo
Oh, Karen, I believe in you, too, and call you friend. I don't know what I'd do without you all now!! Blessings!
I used to call my cyberspace friends "imaginary", but they've all became very real. Last year I met 3 of my cyber friends in person and we all spent a weekend together at a beautiful old bed and breakfast on Cane River in Natchitoches. We didn't stop talking the entire weekend except to sleep a little and watch some movies and eat. We'd been in a Yahoo group for years and finally got together and it was like we were (are) long lost sisters!
Renee, my Goddess/Angel friend. You are so precious, my guide, friend and sister. Blessings!!
I adore your poem. You have a real gift, you know. Please, please show it off more!
Hi Marion~ I have to say that your poem is my favorite, and this may be my favorite of all your poems. It's laced with beauty and hope but also the cruelty of life which we can't deny. very thought-provoking and touching. xxox
SJ, thank you, I'll try to post my stuff more. New stuff, that is. Blessings, my friend!
Margaret, I appreciate your comment. I wrote this during a very dark period of my life and have reworked in recently. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings!
Holy holy, I read the first one and want to stay just there. Holy holy. You know, I read "by Marion" on the way over here...it shows up on your page at the beginning of your posts and I was thinking you wrote that one. Marion, I'm going to believe it anyway, k. (And that picture of you on the sidebar...I want more. It is gorgeous!)
xo
erin
Ahhhh, and now here you are. Here you are. With questions and perhaps answers, Marion. I wish I had the afternoon to tap out words to answer you. I wish I had today to spend musing this one. To hell with it! I will, over work, money, slipping things in bags. I'll muse this one, Marion. I love it, sister friend.
xo
erin
Erin, my muse...so you like my peeking picture? LOL! I may one day put the whole me up. :-O You are too, too sweet, friend. Blessings & Hugs---
beautiful post - and great blog! have a wonderful remainder of the day!
Thanks for stopping by, Gypsywoman. Blessings!
You are a rose, for me you are a yellow rose because yellow is my favourite colour.
And of course you can only go into independent book stores. As they are one of the few genuine things left and you my dear friend are a very genuine person.
Love Renee xoxo
The "Dust" poet is anonymous because....? Maybe she didn't want anyone to see her dirty house, or maybe her house was really pristine, and the poem was her as she would like to be...
I don't write like Bradbury, to escape reality. Interesting way of thinking about it though.
Much to ponder over and both beautifully written.
Marion I am so happy that you recognized yourself. That post was you and what I thought about you.
Do you remember telling me that you have native ancestry and when I saw the dragonfly, well, I couldn't resist.
I am so happy that you knew it was you.
Oh yes, we have known each other many many lifetimes.
Love Renee xoxo
Big and little kisses for you today XXxx
love Renee xoxo
Renee, I can see you as a yellow rose. I hope we both end up blooming on the same rose bush. LOL! And how could I not recognize my own self, you silly woman! I do so love you, my wisewoman pal. Blessings!
Snow, you're such an old curmudgeon, but I still love you cuz you're from Mississippi even if you did run away to Oregon. Thanks for stopping in. Blessings!
Saraha, thank you. Your comments mean a lot to me. You're in my prayers and thoughts daily. Blessings, dear poet-friend!
Oh, how I love Rilke and, oh, how I love this poem of yours. Thank you, my friend. The photo too is perfect!
Thank you, Judith! I so appreciate you, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poems. Blessings!
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